Caligula's Launderette

Another double poem day. :P __ APRIL 04 #7. A Point of Contrition; Foxhead this sable brown slight of wood that mars the expanse of asphalts looks like the face ...

Jack; On #3, Why did you ever stop writing poetry?! You are a freakin' master. The last lines are simple gorgeous. I adore loverly imagery and diction, consonance, and alliteration. ...

On 3 April , Okay, this poem blows my fricken mind. It's amazing! I don't have a problem with the dripping and then the dropped , because they are different ...

APRIL 03 #6. Roosters and Crows I am no woman weathervane here to direct and predict a change in the weather. I have yet to prove my limbs point east ...

You rock, Nate. I was wondering why the featured works looked so weird, but I figured you were working on it. ;) Cal.

Thank you guys oh-so-much. :P April 3: what it’s like to drop back into the world, again. I love the inspiration for this one, it's absolutely gorgeous and your poem ...

I got bored and was fiddling around with Photoshop CS2. This was the result. The third wallpaper is just like the first except bigger. Enjoy. :P Ta, Cal.

On April 2 , I love, love, love, love, love, love this poem. I love the atmosphere and the feeling I get from reading it, awesome-sauce, basically. What I think ...

On 2 April , I love, love, love this poem. I especially love the assonance in the first stanza, :P

On 2 April , I adore the last stanza, it pretty much rules. As for the rest of the poem, I really like how short it is, and at the ...

On April 2 , The poem is awesome, I love it. It reminds me of a poem by Baudelaire called Be Drunk .

I adore the imagery and descriptions you have painted, I also love the formating of the last two stanzas. I do agree with Leja that it reads very abrupt in ...

APRIL 02 I don't like some of the stuff in this poem. Oh, well. Again, disregard the dashes, they are there to show you how I want it to look ...

On #2, There is some really good stuff in here, Jacko. Though I'd watch out for using cliched phrases, i.e. S1 L4. I think, when you get around to fiddling ...

So, this here is my poetry thread for National Poetry Writing Month . I welcome any comments et al. This thread is rated PG-13 because some of the art I ...